That was absolutely amazing! I loved every single chapter.
Keep up the good work!

Oh, fluff... you can never have too much. E/C fluff, that is.

- Adi

Great work on this story! Now I am almost certain that you are the Eric I know from my old role-playing days. I recognize your writing style. (I just added you to my friends on LJ by they way.) Lovely work, m’dear. I love the idea behind this; good original plot. Christine seems to do a bit too much sleeping. Nice work at keeping it concise, but sometimes the chapters seemed almost too short. I would have preferred to read more detail of Erik and Christine’s relationship along with your wonderful descriptions of everything. Things almost seemed to move to quickly in this story, especially at the end. I’m not quite sure what cause Christine to come back to Erik, even though I am an E/C shipper. Lovely epilogue. The touch with the scarf was wonderful.

Amazing!

Personally, I would have left the story at the end of the ninth chapter. But that is just me. Good story all around, and I must confess that I liked the ending. The true Angel of Music was a nice touch.

phantom_jedi

I love your ending! Rauol is sadly very very underestimated, he is a great man and perfect for Christine. However, I am an E/C fan but truly wish I could do some R/C as well, but sadly I can never quite bring myself to do it! I just can't help but pity Erik and I just love how you've played out such a detailed story for us. I love mostly that in your story it deals with realistic aspects, Christine's rehearsals, Raoul appearing with kisses, Christine's reaction she would make of getting her memory back (always running to Raoul), but I like mostly from all that: That Erik And Christine Actually Left The Dank Lair! I just love that they went out and did something with other humans and having just as romantic a time as Raoul could have given her. I smiled when you had your charachter always re-entering during dates and talking to Erik. Surely she was the guiding voice of what you wanted to say to Erik, encouraging him to not give up as we all do (I know I've had my share of screaming at a screen, directed of course at Erik, but nontheless looking quite stupid).

All-in-all this was a great fanfic that I truly enjoyed. I know that PhanFics are quite abundant especially in E/C but even if the ideas good, I don't read something unless I'm impressed by it. You presented a differnt scenario than just the same old fill of sweet words and no substance. I like how there was a situation and a timeline of things that ocured over actual days. Your description of events and charachters was very good. I may not be a world-class writer but I praise your skill and thank you for your creativity.

This was very good and an enjoyable read.

Kudos and regards,
- FlameEmber

interesting idea, I'll definetly read all through and give ya my thoughts.

That was an adorable little fic! But I do have a bit of critism - please, don't take this too hard - on the word choices you use sometimes. To me, it seems that you've just looked up synonyms in a thesaurus to use "big" words, but you don't always know how to use them properly.

For example:

"Her lustrous voice came to a halt..."

Pardon my French, but no way in hell. Lustrous is the surface of a pearl. Lustrous is a smooth, satiny bit of stained glass. Lustrous is not, however, a voice. A better phrasing would be "her angelic voice" or even "her ethereal voice" if you were going for that polished, beautiful look. But not lustrous.

So, my suggestion to you would be to get a beta reader to help you out (I will volunteer myself, if you like, but I'm not saying you have to use me) or to double-check with a dictionary for word forms, parts of speech, etc. But the latter is a lot of work, so I would just go with a beta.

Sorry if I was too harsh. I really didn't mean to be - this is a great fic, and I look forward to reading more by you as soon as I can!

Peace, out!
-DDOTR

Brava! I loved reading this!
Your Obedient Servent,
Angel or Demon

How very fluffy! How very, very sweet! E/C forever!

That was very nicely done! Brava! Onto my favorites you (and this phic!) go!

Bravo, excellent! MORE, PLEASE?

Wow, I love all of your phics. Great job!

Ah! What a choice! He risks being left with nothing. Not even the one precious thing that he has been graced with; that he has lived for [besides Christine of course]

Wow. Seriously, I love this piece. Yeah, some of it's a bit cliche, but it was a great read. I must say that the coolest thing about it was the Angel of Music -- that was completely not what I was expecting, but now that I look back it makes total sense! Kudos for thinking that one up.

~Red