Aw, cute little story! I loved Miroku, and you played him excellent! Fantastic job!

Very nice. I always enjoy Miroku fics. Great job.

Oy, there are so many good fanfic writer's these days. This is the second story of yours that I've read. I read your other about Legolas's captivity adn couldn't stop reading it until it was over. It was like when you find a good novel that entrances you and takes you on a journey through it's world. Anyways, when I saw your Inuyasha story, I couldn't resist. I'm a little bit of an obsessive otaku ^_^. Your character protrayal was excellent. Miroku seems to be somewhat of an overlooked chacrter. Most fanfics I've sen focus on Inuyasha/Kagome. Now that I think about it, Miroku's certain untimely death is somewhat of a depressing topic. I like how you protrayed his view of each member of the the ragtag group of demon slayers. I really don't have any critques about the story. Arigatou and Sayonara!
miles of smiles,
Naomi