OK now you have done itI really crying now. The story was great and very sad.

that's so sad..and cute

That's really really sad. Poor Shannon.

Very nice...You captured the emotions very well.

We i love it its so sad i started to cry!

great writing. although i didnt like shannon and jeff bein together lol *no offense i swear lol* i still liked the writing style. great job.

Okay, this time I did cry. After reading 'For You' and then moving straight to this I just couldn't contain myself.
All the hurt and the ansgt was just flowing and the lyrics just tied it all together beautifully. The way that Shannon remembered Jeff made my heartache for him. Those poor love birds.
I love your writing and I love you musi! Rock on baby girl, rock on.
Al Woe Asher

AW that was great and sad.

This was beautifully sad. You are one of my favorite authors, and every story you write is unparalled. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

I absolutely loved this story. It really touched me, for some reason. It was very well written, with a lot of emotion. It was short, but impactful. Very good job.

Aww! That's sad...*Sniff* Love the band and love that song. I swear OLP wrote it about Jeff.
'I miss your purple hair, I miss the way you taste'

This story sucks! ShannonXJeff sucks yuk! You are so stupid and retarded fucking retard!
Loser
Go lick someones pussy for all I care

Great Story. Love it! Hardcore! :-D
Keep writing,
V

Wow, another great story, as usual. This was so sad, poor Jeff and Shannon, I had tears in my eyes reading this. Please keep up the great writing.

God girl I you made me cry with this one poor baby shannon. BUt the fact that Jeff saved him would be the way that he wanted to go. God love these stories please write more of them.