This is really charming, I love how it starts out all Mary Sueish and then 'delicately' points out it's about a four year old.

Suprisingly good for a person who never reads summaries.
You know the fanfiction "Ford's poetic abilities" in the Hitchhikers section? Yeah, well let me tell you that FLAMING (there, i've written it. So shoot me.)a fanfiction that CLEARLY states that it should be Bad is definitely BELOW BOARD.(As vogon poetry is. or had that slipped your mind?). And, in a world that prides itself as culturally diverse, why flame something? If you don't agree with something, why call someone (and I quote) a PERVERT?!?
Constructive critisism is all well and good, but..hey. Flaming IS NOT.
And if you class this as a flame..well. Class it as a flame. Do with it as you will. STICK IT UP YOUR LEFT NOSTRIL FOR ALL I CARE.
Yours Truly
THE ASGARD EAGLE OF AEGIRS HALLS.

Aww this is such a cute tale. Once more I love the descriptiveness in your writing. You really know how to set the mood and the feeling of the moment.

^_^ Tres funny, and quite therapeutic. This almost undid the damage of reading All Souls Night.

GreenCat3, wannabe PPCer

Now that was surprising! Good job on it! I think your writing skills are improving, but they were already pretty good to begin with. This is ADORABLE, I really did love it. You really should write a little more, though ^^ *hint hint squeak*
~ Aniriel

This is very cute! You have a really nice way with words.

Torres--
I love you!
On a tangential note, this was a lovely story. I especially like Arwen's dark curls, for some reason, and the rumpled blue dress. :)
Sincerely,
Dax non-Elrondion (!)

AW! That was adorable, and well-written. *huggleses*

I couldn't stop laughing!

* LOL* that was good!

Was that delightful or what? I loved it! How very vry sweet!

Aw! So cute! Theraputic value +2 brownie points!

I loved it - it was indeed very theraputic! :o)

that was so cute! I love these kind of fics!! I can just pictures Arwen as a baby gurgling! ~_^ keep it up!!
~Sulwen

That was great! I wasn't expecting that at all. And it was very well written, too!! nice job!