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Ruby 2008-12-16 . chapter 3
Great story! Though... It's impossible to get a false positive. You can only get false negatives.
stxs 2008-12-08 . chapter 22
is there more?
JadedOne47 2007-04-15 . chapter 22
I totally can't believe you haen't finished this story.
Please finalise it... wat happens?
Clari 2007-04-14 . chapter 22
I've just re-read this fic and discovered it's still not finished.

Any chance of an update?
CharmedAli 2005-06-01 . chapter 2
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! i think u get my point but come on u can't abandon ur story
CharmedAli 2005-05-29 . chapter 1
u have 2 continue, u can't just abandon ur story keep writing, it is just not fair if u abandon stories!
Aligewe 2005-04-12 . chapter 22
This is great couldn't stop reading! (for once didn't get interupted LOL) I really wonder what Osiris is up to ?!?! Oh well I will find out soon, I hope... looking forwaards to a new chapter
Aligewe
O'Neill with two L's 2005-03-23 . chapter 22
any plans on updating soon?
Please do, I want to see where this is going.
Murder 2005-03-11 . chapter 22
This si the first SG-1 fanfic I have ever read and I have to say if this is the calibre of writing I wil have to read more.

I was going through the Ranma directory and normally I ignore most everything else as unknown or I am not interested in but the tittle for some reason caught my eye. And I am very gratful it did.

I a bit like the author of this story wondered if anything happen between Jake and Sam when they had thier memories change. Unlike me Verse12 came up with a whole story and consquences for that action.

I am very happy to see the style of the AG series continued in this story and the mixing of the episodes but mainly I just enjoy seeing Jake and Sam finally get together.

Please continue, I would love to see Jake and Sam have a true relationship and a happy family life...eventually.

Problems seem to be coming forth but with thier friends I am sure this wil come to a happy conclusion.

Great story please continue.
grg 2005-01-29 . chapter 22
get on with the story! on a lighter note good so far but even better if you speed it up a bit oh yeah and make the chapters a little longer too
CharmedAli 2005-01-21 . chapter 22
dun dun dun, plz continue, i can't wait
igotnothin' 2005-01-12 . chapter 22
What! you stopped!
;) hurry type more!
H2O-intolerant 2005-01-06 . chapter 22
Finally!! I've been waiting SO long for you to update!! Anyway... good chapter! And I hope I don't have to wait that long for next update! Smile ;)
eb2504 2005-01-06 . chapter 22
Im really enjoying this story. Very curious to find out whats gonna happen with Osiris Hope theres more soon!
ichargrl 2005-01-05 . chapter 22
so, so evil. I'm going to be waiting for the next installment!!
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