good story,bye

That was so wonderful! You are a talented writer and you should update soon. Why? Because I want you to. Just kidding. Please update soon. I am also oddsesed with Peter Pan and my 5 year old sister has taken to calling me Peter Pan because of it. By "those silvery things" are you talking about the silver candy pearls that people put on cakes?

Shawna I love this!! It's been so long since you've updated though huh! I LOVE Peter Pan and he's so adorable in the movie LoL I wish you would continue this if you have time, or at least tell me what was going to happen! ^_^

Great story. Add more?

lmao it was short but this is so exciting! didnt anne leave her children? UPDATE SOON!

Enjoying it so far - keep it comeing!
Can't wait for more!
**Tessa

Hello!
Good, but as you've already said, short. Doesn't matter though, as I'm sure you'll make up for it in later chapters!
Please update soon!

HOrrid old great aunt. Can't wait for your next chapter.

Hi again!
Dude, this is great, but any chance you could space it out a bit more? Its a bit odd on the eyes!
More? Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with bright pink icing and hundreds and thousands on top (you must know what they are?!)
Ta!

this story is totally on my favourites list

This is really good so far! More? Please? Pretty please? With icing and those little silver things on top?

hey!! i'm obsessed w/ peter pan too, tho not as much as my friend rachel. She's REALLY obsessed. She cried at that new movie because she said it was SO wrong. *shrugs* i thought it was good. Anyway, I think your story is really, really good!! Update soon, or else I'll just have to keep bugging you!! Lol!! Luvs...Mouse