Wow that's sad yet incredibly similar to what I would imagen happening. Good Job.

i like this. (at this point rusco learns that she has been reviewing in a very unorganized and rather uncouth manner.) Anyway. Yeh. I like Boromir. It irks me that people make him out to be the bad guy. (rants a bit. like when ranting about people putting Edmund down...)

Wow. You're good. I'm stupid at poetry.

Weep, aye, for Boromir. Honorable warrior tempted and redeemed. Honor to him ever through this song.

Alas, for Boromir! Too misunderstood by too many fans, a gallant, noble, great man fallen to a temptation brought by desperation. ^_^ I was always a big fan of Boromir's, and it's good to find something like this. Though I don't think he was intended to have a love left behind (although Tolkien did originally plan for him to be betrothed to a daughter of Theoden's) it's always nice to wonder, and the poem is quite good. You can feel the sorrow. I take it you were likely a great fan of the steward's son. I know I wet several pages of novel when he died. Great work!

Thanks for that, and your positive feedback. Most kind. Please do have a look at the other two poems I've posted and let me know what you think - good or bad. I have just started posting a fanfic story too to which the other two poems are related, if you are interested. :)

Very touching. Nice job. :)