 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 11 Perfect epilogue. I'm gonna cry now. Don't look don't look. |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 10 Oh gods.. you could have ended it here.
Maybe you should have. A wonderful tale.
I don't think it could have been better. |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 9 Good story. Good suspense. Perfect really. But sad and therefore I cry |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 8 Quite good. Again.. a good good chapter. Wow. |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 7 Yep very worthy a read |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 6 Oh oh so good |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 5 Why that's fine quite fine |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 4 Holy yikes |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 3 Neat |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 2 Beautiful *wipe my tears away* |
 James Birdsong 2006-03-18 . chapter 1 *blink blink* ... *blink* Perfect! |
 wordflows 2004-05-31 . chapter 11A wonderful story. ^-^ Sometimes the best endings aren't clear cut or happy, even if they are in their own way.
And the dance begins again...as it always will. |
 Eggman 2004-05-08 . chapter 11Love that story :) Really just two people reading? It's got to be at least 3 by now :o) |
 Angus MacSpon 2004-05-08 . chapter 11Very well done. Some grammar or spelling problems, but you're written a warm, interesting, original story that I'm glad to have read. |
 instantR 2004-05-08 . chapter 11 It's very well written, has believable characters, and keeps true to a lot of the things in the canon. But the best thing I can say about this is that it's unique. |