oh my god, that was SO cute! I luv fluff! Well, from now on, that is. ^^;

^_^; Ah, writers and their editors! LOL! XD

It was cute! ^_^ I understand what you mean about fluff being difficult to write. ^_^; I have difficulty too. Sometimes, I think I'd be better off as an editor, lol (I think my editing skills are better than my writing skills. o.o; lol)

Ha, anyway, it was good for someone who claims to suck at fluff. The end just needs to flow a bit more nicely. Sentences are somewhat choppy, and there is much repetition with Yami & Yuugi's names. (See what I mean? LOL) But I'm sure your editor could've told you that. ^_^; lol

This is making me want to work on my writing skills! Thanks for the inspiration! ^_~

Oh, PJ's to match their eyes! Yay! ^-^ This is cute so far! Gotta love shy little Yuugi! ^-^

Ne, about the title. Kokoro no Hikari means Heart's Light, so is the title supposed to read "Heart's Light - Light's Heart"? I was just wondering if you meant the 2nd part of the title to say the same thing as the Japanese part or if it's supposed to be those words switched. ^_^;

kawaii!

Aw :D Very cute... Yugi does strike me as the type to bounce everywhere... Wish I could do Chibi-eyes - might get my way more often too!

(oh, and Yugi's taste is addictive, not addicting... :D )

Great story! LUV'D it! Keep writing and hope I can read more of your YUGIOH fics. Wonderful job!

Nice Story! im impressed!

You dont suck, I like it!

Wow...this was such a kawii fic I really liked the fluff between Yugi and Yami it was really sweet you should write more fluff stories with Yugi and Yami in it

aw this is so cute! update soon!

Aww! They're just so cute! ^-^ Both of them so caring and so sweet and so kawaii! *gushes then coughs and returns to review with at least a modicum of sense (^^;)* I loved reading this and hope you'll write more soon. These two so deserve to get even closer together. ^-^

one word cool

Great story some mistakes but they don't bother me please update soon.

Hey it was just getting good! I'd love to read more!^_^