this was wonderfully written! ^_^

Hello! I've not read much of this pairing or fandom before. I liked the machine-like thoughts, the commands. It felt mechanical. There were a few mistakes, not too bad. I could proof-read/edit for you if you like.

aww, wow that was good! :)

I think I love you. If only *this* had happened in the movie!!
I can see that English is not your first "tongue" (I'm Danish myself). Getting a beta is a good idea- But I'm bad, so I'm not offering. I can however tell you that 'information' is an "uncountable" noun (can't be turned into plural), and therefor it should be 'Too much information' or 'Too many pieces of information', not 'Too many information'. Don't worry, it's a normal mistake we non-english people make. I still have to stop and think sometimes.
Well, I loved it very much. Nothing like Smith/Neo and then ended with some nice Agent snuggles :) Now there's a sentese you don't hear much.

Wow...
How did I miss this one?

interesting!

That's a very intense structure you've used, and brilliant for setting out the conflicts within Smith. One thing I would say towards the end is that I hadn't thought that Jones and Brown would approve of or share in his growing humanity. I think it's more something which they can't understand but which they believe is wrong because it defies their purpose as Agents. Otherwise, interesting and suitable layout. ^^

i liek ^_^