that was sweet

AW. ITS SO CUTE. I LOVE IT.

One of the best (if not, the best) AyuHiyo fanfics out there. The two are in character (and yet it forms a good story, which is quite rare).

Now if only they made like a special based on your story...
Anyways, much love to the story and kudos to you for making it!

aw, that was soo cute. gotta love narumiXhiyono. :D Spiral is awesome! lol

--nao-chan

oh my gosh!
this story is definitely one of the best written fics in anime/manga history. The storyline is definitely different from most fics of the couple I've read. The play of words used was utterly phenomenal. Would you care for a career in the Marketing industry? ^o^

Hope you continue writing stories with as much depth as this one.

Au revoir mon ami ! Merci pour l'histoire merveilleuse

I can't believe I never reviewed this! It's been forever since I read it! Great job.

aw i LOVE this couple so freekin much but there arnt enough ff about them :'(

that was so sweet i loved it xD

I bet you haven't gotten a review for this in a very long time. ^^

But I find it utterly adorable and very close to the canon characterization. Wonderfully written. And I'm kinda sad that it didn't last more than the 2 chapters.

I love this story/It's very cute and funny.I wish they did end up together in the anime =C

This story is so cute! And it is my favorite story in Spiral fanfiction. Keep up the good work.

Aww! I've never read a AyuHiyo as beautiful as this T__T!! I love you, and I love your fanfic ;O;!
Ayumu is too pretty TOT! I can't explain what I feel~ but...I love him =^=! And I really like the pair that he do whit Hiyo-Hiyo!
Well...that's all XD sorry if I hace any mistake in the review, but I speak (and then, write XD) spanish, not english uwuU.
I want to read more AyuHiyo from you ;w;!
Kisses and hugs :3!

omg! this is so cute!
i really like it!

What an adorable story! I absolutely loved it ^.^

IT WAS SO CUTE! I like the mood of the story. Keep on wirghting.

Reading Bliss. Heaven in two and a half pages.

Or a reasonable gander, at least.

(BTW-Why did his sister-in-law leave?)