Intriuging… actually, I really like this. Ro is definately a very original character… when she tossed the sword to Rebecca and Rebbeca ducked I started laughing… too funny, yet real ^.^
I love the way you describe everything… I can see it like a movie, which is always the sign of a talented author. Please write more soon, because this is awesome! ^.^
Beautiful. Wonderful. Hot (What?? Jack Sparrow's in it, isn't he??)Incredible! ^.^
Also, if you get the chance, do you think you could review my story, "Shattered Dreams"?? Please and thank you!! ^.^
-Piper (dA HyPeR OnE)