 Haruka-Hime 2008-03-14 . chapter 1An all time favorite, though I could have sworn it was already on my favorites list. |
 Selene Falcon 2006-11-25 . chapter 1 Hello!! I must say you something: your stories are really really great, I wish I could write as wonderful as you. And I wanted you to ask if I can use the first stanza of your poem? I promise that I will admit that it isn't my poem but yours.^^
I hope you can understand my review, I'm German and my English isn't very good yet, I'm still learning... |
 kangaroo 2004-08-26 . chapter 1This was brilliant! Not sure which I like best...the Sirius one or this one...do they work together? Cos that would be very cool.
The style is quite...Shakespearian? but it makes sense...oh, duh, sorry I'm being thick...it might cos it's in iambic pentameter? is it? I like the style.
This sentence blew me away..."Human mind and reason diminishing, burned away in sliver fire
Quickly replaced by a rising tide of bestial savagery, lupine ire."
That I really, really, liked. Very, very clever.
love kangaroo. you have a talent for this. |
 Anony-moose 2004-05-20 . chapter 1 Ooh, very nice poem you have here. I really like the ryhming patterns; you have quite the ability to make it all flow. :) |
 Mrs. Fawkes 2004-03-18 . chapter 1I was in serch of good fanfiction and your name popped up in my head.
I love this poem. I felt so sad for Remus. The way you explain how he got bitten and the way you describe him being re-born and they way he is between two worlds. And that he only wants one night to be free but is forever tied to the moon.
I hope you do write more
Mrs. Fawkes~ |
 Turcote 2003-12-29 . chapter 1Wow! You write some GREAT poetry! |
 Sirius/Remus Chick 2003-12-28 . chapter 1YES! Another GREAT poem! Goodness . . . you write really well. Perfect, absolutely perfect. The descriptions you used mixed well with the situation. Yet another wonderful piece of writing from you. I can't wait to read more! |
 Sirius Black Here 2003-12-27 . chapter 1that was good! |