Beautiful! Two of my most favorite anime and romantic pairings!

Donne's poem is quite powerful. It complements your story well.

Excellent fic!

I thought that this was a very nice fic. More people should review this story, but it looks like I'm the second person to review this. I don't know what Hoshi no Koe is, but I do know Saikano. So, it sort of confused me for a bit. Other than that, great job on writing this!! :P

Later,
Wolfy

Though I do like Saikano more than Hoshi no Koe...and it was more based on Hoshi no Koe...
You did an excellent job capturing the emotions of the characters from Hoshi no Koe. The SaiKano bit was a bit surrealistic and there were a few inconsistancies overall (they would have noticed if the Tarsians were following them home...), you managed to pull it off pretty well.
Of course...the SaiKano bit WAS a little confusing...
8/10 (or so) ^^