OK im in love with the damn story. It was SO great. Im really sry to say that i have to get off the computer and cut my review short because of a storm that threatens to cut off the internet. NO! BUt GOOD story write another Kietro...there just arent ever enough of them.

Good story. But no offense, but I don't like the fact that Lance died. I mean, I realize that it goes with the story but I just don't like the fact that he died. Ok, I'm babbling now. Well, bottom line: Great story!

this was a good story...i nearly cried when i found out that Lance died. the tears were climbing when he told kitty that he loved her and that he always will...(that was so sad) this story was written so well, i don't know what else i could say but please keep writing stories because you have a tremendous gift!

good first chap, ill read the rest when i get some bloody time

belive me people i may not be able to write but this person can ratings of 1-5 ~Druid-Priestess~
would be 10

A very sweet, romantic fic. My teeth are rotting as I type this, honestly ;) Sweetness is your forte!
The song is beautiful, and it was a really fun ride. Gratz on completing your first Evo-fic! And thanks for telling an adorable story. -Beaubier-

awesome. I loved every chapter and i can't wait for more

that was really good, all sweet and romantic!! okay you are a really good Kietro writer, you should definitely write more of them.. great job!!

aw that was so sweet :) im so sad the fic ended.. blah. oh well, i vote for another kietro for 5 reasons: 1, they're good! 2, u write good kietros! 3, there aren't enough of them! 4, i love them! 5, they're GOOD! (ok i'll stop u get the point. vote kietro tho u prob wont want to do another one)

I would give you a proper review, but I'm speechless. This story is so... so... so... Well, it's a WONDERFUL story, and very well written, and... I can't think up a word to sum it up... But I have the biggest smile on my face right now, and that only happens from reading a REALLY REALLY good story... Unless it's a good humor, but with a romance it's utterly unusual. *Sigh* this story is so- so- so- As I said, before, I can't think of anything to say... I don't know, but it's making me get teary eyed. In a good way. Um... Maybe I should go now.
~Persona

Since 8:07 this morning my day was completely miserable (literally) I have parents that have no trust in me! But even though I'm not happy for a that brief moment I was reading this, I think I lost my grief... Thank You... Your a wonderful writer, let no one tell you otherwise.
Thank you for an Erev Shel Shoshanim, or in my language thanks for being you...

Wow that was really beautiful. And beautiful is normally not a word I use every day. I'm not much of a romantic, which makes you wonder agin why I'm writing romance fics. It's just the Kitty/Pietro pairing I guess. They don't seem as mushy to me as the other couples.
Anyways tha was really well written - the enitre fic I mean - you're off to a great start. Hope to read another from you soon. Maybe you cold try an Amyro.

This was REALLY good! Are you going to make a seaqul?

Please continue!=^^= Where are they going? I'm getting so excited! Are there gonna be any twists in the later chapters? I was just wondering... But I really love this fic for what it is. *giggles* Good luck with the next chapter.^^

augh! omg! when i read the chap title "valentines day" i immediately assumed it would be a nice long chapter complete with preparation, and DETAILS OF THE DATE. do i seriously have to wait to find out what happens on the date? ...yes?