Fabulous updates!

jack and sam banter always makes me laugh

im really miffed now... i spent four days reading this only to find that its not actually complete wa
otherwise i loved this story to bits its Kept me captivated for 4 days
the only other thing i have to comment is that i would add angst to you genre because most of the story although incredibly funny at allot of places had a ** load of angst in it.
i tried reading your uncut version but found it to much of a pain to find (sorry)

looking forward to next chapie

apocalyps24

Great story.

I can't believe Jack said that! The range of emotions throughout this chapter are amazing. Jack tried everything he could to push her away, but she kept trying to help him. That's why their love is so amazing.
Thanks for upadating!

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to more.

This is fantastic. I can't believe that you are still working on this title but no complaints here. I really enjoy reading your stories and read some more than once. Thanks

I very much appreciate all the work you've had to put into this chapter. I love this story and I hope now that that chapter is done with, you won't have as much of a fight with later chapters.

wonderful would like to read the unedited version of the whole story
great story
jeanise

'Lo, Danny-poo'...

Oh, dear lord, I haven't laughed this hard in ages. I can't wait to read the rest of this!

Hey there! I'm so glad to see this continue! Are you going to have a new chapter for The Last One Falls soon too? I love it and I refuse to give up on it. I don't care how long it takes just update as soon as you can! This one again and that one!

i know i just write you but i really really like to have all the unedite version please and re-please because i love this already so much and with the unedite i'm sure this will be perfect so please do this for me

hey i know that make long time you write that but i just start to read it and i appreciate to have the long version please and i love it so far

I have really enjoyed this story, and there have been so many hilarious moments throughout. This could very well be one of my all time favorite Sam/Jack fanfiction stories. However, I have to say you've practically turned Sam into a screaming shrew in this story when she's usually such a calm and warm person and is always so forgiving of Jack. She's in a horrible position; they both are. And I don't doubt that her screwed up hormones have a lot to do with her anger, but there have now been 33 chapters and it doesn't appear the end is in sight yet. The biggest problem with their marriage is that it is secret and can't be shared with anyone, and I can't understand how they've made it as far as they have. Marriage is often no bed of roses even when everybody knows about the marriage, but it seems to me that Sam is the one that is most often being hurt by Jack, and they rarely get time to spend quality time together, and when they do get together, it's all about having sex. Has your "muse" come back? And when are you going to finish this story, being it's been more than a year since Ch. 33 was posted?

I have enjoyed this story so very much that it may become one of my all-time favorite SG1 fanfiction stories. Feel a tad sorry for Teal'c having to be the referee between the two couples.