Its really a nice story, lufia's fanfic is kinda rare^^ Im glad I found the good one :d And it;s Jerin-Aguro xD

Wow, I kind of just reread this after working on the long hiatus of my Lufia fanfiction story.

And I still laugh at their fighting. Well done.

Good job...I like how you write, both in narrative and in dialogue. And that's one rough relationship going on there! I think you had the start to two good ideas in this story, but would have liked both drawn out more...realizing this was meant as a quick fanfic, I just love depth.

Aw!! SO CUTE!! I love this story! I really do!!.
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Please... ::puppy eyes:: Write more about this couple!!
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TAKE CARE!!

Ah... well, that took an unexpected twist! Great description and dialogue, *especially* dialogue. And it's still cute. ;) I hope this won't be the only Lufia related story you'll do. Maybe one on Lufia 2 (if you've played it)?

Great ending to a great little story. :)
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While the game certainly showed no signs of a Christian kind of religion (or even practical things like horses), you managed to integrate this stuff very well. This was quite a well-written chapter. I like how you characterized the town and the situation that happened. Keep up the good work.

I like that. The end was like . . . unexpected. I just laughed. I liked the way you described the water. I'm hoping you'll write more cause this is really interesting.

Very nice story, Lalita, I'm hoping to see more of it soon!

Thanks to Doc for the tip-off!

Absolutely wonderful story! I love the effort you put into the characters - the little detail about Aguro's past, for example - and the clarification of Jerin's crush on the Hero (some people really blow that thing out of proportion; you're very right in stating that it was just a little infatuation).

I used to be a big fan of this couple myself long ago (I mean come on, that ending really hinted at those two...), but over time I stopped caring so much (Lufia I isn't really one of my favorite games). But this story got me into those two all over again - at least for a while ;) Lovely work; I hope you write another Lufia story soon. We sure could use your talent around here.

Heh. That was cute. No, actually, that was adorable. Hm. Well, let's just say it was both cute *and* adorable. I used to be a fan of Jerin and Aguro, but time made me care less, I suppose. Your story made me think twice. Very well written, which is a relief since lately fanfiction.net has been receiving a fairly large wave a crap. And that ending. Hehe. That last sentence made me laugh out loud. Excellent job. I hope you will write more Lufia stories and not leave this just a fleeting idea. Gods know we need more fanfiction from good writers!