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| Saskia Mitchell 2003-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat an excellent story. You have everything, the longing, the regret, the uncertainty. I loved it, truly. |
| luxor 2003-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseOf course I loved this ... left me feeling sad, unsettled and hopeful all at the same time. Oh yes, you do the angst well, coolbyrne. You really speak to where G and S are right now and where they could go ... if they would just *talk* to each other. Your dialogue is very realistic and well done. Loved it. |
| TriplePirouette 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abusewonderful story!! |
| Aria 2003-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, that was... wonderful. Seriously. You addressed the real heart of the problem between G&S, and you did it perfectly. The 'butterfly in China' analogy was spot on, too. Well-written and very well-done... as always! |
| michstjame 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was just beautiful, and I love that song. I'm glad you had the eggnog that led you to write this. :-) |
| Belle Walker 2003-12-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Thanks for writing it. |