What an excellent story. You have everything, the longing, the regret, the uncertainty. I loved it, truly.

Of course I loved this ... left me feeling sad, unsettled and hopeful all at the same time. Oh yes, you do the angst well, coolbyrne. You really speak to where G and S are right now and where they could go ... if they would just *talk* to each other. Your dialogue is very realistic and well done. Loved it.

wonderful story!!

Well, that was... wonderful. Seriously. You addressed the real heart of the problem between G&S, and you did it perfectly. The 'butterfly in China' analogy was spot on, too. Well-written and very well-done... as always!

Well, that was just beautiful, and I love that song. I'm glad you had the eggnog that led you to write this. :-)

Great story! Thanks for writing it.