 Syndic-Machiavelli 2008-11-07 . chapter 1 That penultimate "him" should be a "me." I obviously cannot think and type at the same time after reading such wonderful fic. :) |
 Syndic-Machiavelli 2008-11-07 . chapter 1Please let this not become an abandoned WIP! It was infinitely more satisfying that the canon meeting in HBP, particularly in the layers to Tom's character: watching the small incidents become little seeds of Dumbledore-hatred, watered with a good dose of estrangement from the magical world, ambition and even a dollop of reader empathy. Good to know that "ickle Dodo" (snicker) will get what is coming to her. (Since she and most of the other teachers at Hogwarts (and Fudge possibly) are all around Voldemort's age, I often wonder how they coexisted in their school years.)
As for Ollivander: "Indeed, young Master Ma... ahh, Mr. Riddle" and the wink and his "glorious eccentricity" make him hope that there will be more of him to come as well.
I'm off to read that Philokrates/Albus fic now actually... |
 im to lazy to write i story 2007-12-08 . chapter 1update soon |
 Baku 2005-09-03 . chapter 1 Wow. I like this view of Tom. ^^;
Can't wait until the next chapter comes out. :d |
 Helen 2005-06-17 . chapter 1 That was utterly fantastic! It was well written and interesting. Many fics are ill-paced, leaving the reader sure that the writer has only thought about the beginning and the end-not the middle. Your story, on the other hand, is perfectly paced and has left me in a gloriously happy mood. It's the kind of story that leaves the reader refreshed with a good taste in his or her mouth. If there were any gramatical errors they didn't bother me (not a small feat). Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon! |
 fallen_angel 2005-04-06 . chapter 1 omg..that was amazing!! i cant wait for your next chapter to come out!...omg dumbledore is soo mean...i love tom in this story!...please update soon! |
 prof. spider 2004-06-08 . chapter 1 when riddle gets sorted, add a sorting hat song. i like to read those. |
 paradox01 2004-03-18 . chapter 1Aww.. Tom is adorable isn't he? I think he seems a bit too adorable really... too young, Harry didn't seem that young.. but its a really interesting take on TMR. Great job. Please update soon.
-paradox |
 Alison66 2004-02-01 . chapter 1Hey, pretty good so far. I liked the concept of Dumbledore introducing Tom to Diagon Alley since I read it in The Broken Victory, as well as the whole talent/choices concept in the summary. I look forward to seeing you develop this over three more chapters.
Cheers,
Ali |
 Pimpelipom 2004-01-11 . chapter 1Hullo!
Great story, as are the others you have here. I absolutely loved the dialogue and characterisations. What can I say, really? I like this better than the original books. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Cheers, Lalage |
 Evil Angel11 2004-01-05 . chapter 1Wow. Fantastic. I love this. ::bows:: |
 Earanila 2004-01-02 . chapter 1Aww, so little Tom Riddle went all evil because he couldn't have a snakie for his birthday. How terribly depressing.
Dodo... [chuckle] I hope she ends up doomed to a life with no fluffy Kneazles what so ever.
Brilliant story, just like all the rest of your work. |
 Vanessa 2003-12-28 . chapter 1 *runs around like crazy* At last- another *well-written* Tom Riddle fic in the works! For such a fascinating, complicated character in the HP series, there's a lot of poorly written junk about him, but there's always a few genuinely good stories out there- and this one looks like it's going to be one of the greats. I'm in love with your "Two Worlds and In Between" and this is already one of my favorites:) |
 katie 2003-12-28 . chapter 1 plz write soon. i loved this chapter. |
 SpiderSquirrel 2003-12-27 . chapter 1I love iit! |