Very cute. I really enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to move onto something else.

This is just so well written. Everything is in character. Even the demon you invented is clearly just...right. He's perfect for and Inuyasha series demon. He says the right things, moves the right way. It all just fits so nicely and cleanly. I can see it in perfect anime in my head. I love stories that allow me to read without making mental corrections, and yours are consistently perfect.

OH WOW, I TOTALLY LOVED THAT STORY-YOU ROCK!

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THAT STORY,

THANK YOU!

NOW I AM GOING TO GO BALL MY EYE'S OUT ON HOW BEAUGHTIFUL OT WAS-

BUBBY!

great cliff! i mean, i totally hate it, but great timing!

:)

can't help but drop by and leave a review everytime i read something really nice from you... hope you still write *hint hint*

love ya

i loved it! please continue writing wonderfulstories

that was so cool! and you did in under 20 chapters!

go you!

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aw...super kawaii!

I thought your story was AWSOME!

aw so sweet...i really like this

wonderfully cute sweet story. It's nice seeing how human inu deals with unpleasant circumstances.

Dud, nice story. If I were you I probley would of said, that as Inuyasha held onto the Tetsusaiga Kagome could see blood dripping down his wrist. He was holding onto the sword right where it was plunged into the rock face.

That's what I probley would have writen instead. Just givin an idea. Well loved the story and think you should write others. -See ya-

"SIT"...

Nice. Good story.

QueenTatooine

Excellent sotry. .