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Reviews for: The Fight
shortygirl333
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Wow! That was awesome! And the bonus ending was beautifully added. Well done!
Goshikku Seirei
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
Oh!! So funny!! You actually had me riding on the whole thing the whole time!! Gah!! Good job!!
Mysterious Sapphire Butterfly
2007-12-11 . chapter 1
the bonus ending rocked!
so did the story...^_^
Mercurial Phoenix
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Oh...my...GAWD! XD This is so fricking hilarious! I loved it! Yeesh, you've got talent. Nice job!
xxkoffeexx
2005-02-23 . chapter 1
This is the most funniest, realistic short story EVER! ^_^;; I really enjoyed reading this. It gave me a...a...floaty feeling. Hehe.
Trinity
2004-05-17 . chapter 1
This story is really really really interesting, if nothing else! Please excuse me for my ignorance, but one thing I am still not certain about is that is this "Life Studies" class a highschool class, where they (Sakura, Syaoran, Tomoyo, and Eriol) pretend to be husbands and wives, or a real class after they had all married?
I'm sorry but it's just that I'm still in highschool and not really sure about these kinda classes, and the story didn't say it outright either.
Sasaya
2004-04-10 . chapter 1
Wow... that was pretty different from what I read, but I liked it nonetheless.
It's very cute... a bit strange, but very cute. I'm glad that it could all be resolved in the end.
what used to be meemee
2003-12-29 . chapter 1
OOh~! The class was a nice surprise; I was kind of sad in the beginning when they were 'fighting.' And the bonus ending! XD I love your work Chelle-san. 3>
not applicable
2003-12-29 . chapter 1
That was wonderful, Chelle-sama. Your writing style is superb and I loved the way you wrote the reactions in the argument. Very scary stuff, though. I think that it was a very true portrayal of what might actually happen in a real relationship of those sorts.
Please, keep writing whenever you can because I will always look forward to read your writing, which is always a high standard.
Do your best and goodbye.
Yo
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
LOL, gee, the idea of Tomoyo's bodyguards shooting him on the spot prolly set his mind at ease. LOL, really interesting piece.
like a falling star
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
The first part got me quite heartbroken. I kept clicking back to check that it was really a humour fic. Then I realised what was going on and the parts after that were really sweet I started sniffling at the computer. Lovely fic, as usual. I like the conclusion.
wicherwill
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
Dear lord, I finished it, blinked, re-read the ending, and then laughed my guts out as everything made sense. Sorry if that wasn't the intended reaction...but the fight scene was marvy. Very real, and...oh, I want my E/T interaction to be like yours, and it never is. =P
Continue writing!
wicherwill ^_^
KyteAura
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
LoLz...yeah...That sounds more like the Tomoyo-chan I know! This was cute (a bit dramatic in the acting). It really is ashame that Ekai-san didn't read it first.
flitter bug
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
that was great! you SO had me going at first. lol =] and i just love the ending. isnt she sweet? ^^ and i cant imagine syaoran being a day care owner. LOL! great job! i totally loved it =]
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