I really wish you would finish this, but alas, that will never happen. It was certainly enjoyable, though, and most definitely in the top 10% of fics I've read.

Great story. Keep up the good work.

Ah, how very interesting. A good AFxHP fic. True, there are other great fics of the same crossover, but they're still so hard to come by. I love your writing style, especially. It's reminiscent of Colfer's style at times and yet sometimes departs and gets so nice and detailed. On the other hand, I was a bit bothered by some of the changes in character you made-- especially with Juliet in the beginning. But as you've progressed, I've become more comfortable with them. As a matter of fact, I rather like Juliet's realization of what a spaz she's been up to this point. Holly's personality has been pretty on par, too; good job depicting that post-Artemis Fowl, pre-Arctic Incident attitude toward Artmemis that she has.

Despite my criticism, I find this fic very entertaining. I want to know what happens next, but I don't think I'll be satisfied in that respect (judging by your "Gone" remark in your profile). Such a shame, though... And I was really looking forward to your sequel. The way you talked about it made me eager to read. I do so love my character development and story twists...

very good story although i'm sure you already know it and dont need me to tell you. are you planning on completing it? as much as i hate to say this please oh please do! no rush of course.

I'm afraid your olde english isn't *quite* accurate.

Please don't take this personally - I'm trying to help and this is the way I do that.

I am very sorry to inform you of this, my dear, but if you know French much better than (not then) Spanish, I shudder to see your Spanish.
Corrections upon your French (I am French myself, and quite fluent, so consider these good corrections. Also note I couldn't include the accents.)
"Ou le media, prend ton choisi. Je m'appelle Hermione Granger. Allez-vous aller au Hogwarts?"
"Ou la media, comme tu prefere (ou 'comme vous preferez'). Je m'appelle Hermione Granger. Allez-vous (I would recommend using tu, it's much more appropriate for this, but I'm just correcting your grammar) a Hogwarts?"
"Oui, en la annee deux"
"Oui, en deuxieme annee"
"tu bouffon." (that one made me cringe. bouffon is fool as in jester, and the tu shouldn't be there. I won't make a correction for that one, though I will recomend "petite bouffone", should you insist on that word.)
"J'ai sagace, mais tu es stupide"
"Je suis sagace, mais tu ne l'es pas." "Tu manque d'intelligence, alors que j'en ai trop."

Firstly - I must say that I am incredibly disappointed in you for not having updated - I loved this story when I first read it at least a year ago, and I still do, so please update?

Secondly - you consistently make typing errors such as the dreadful then instead of than *shudders*. Your style and grammar being otherwise impecable and your story wonderful, I will forgive you.

Thirdly - if you don't update soon, can I steal the story and attempt to finish it?

whew! that took a long time to read! really like the whole artemis-war-starting-thing!! is there going to be some hermionexartemis romance? hm? now i must go kill my brother whall i'm still on a suger high...* runs off*
BWA HAHAHAHAHAH!

wah! RAVENCLAW?!!

you sound like a friggin' lawyer! but that is good to know!

I thought it was laurel leaves.

I have no idea about the bird... Happyness, joy, beauty, truth, good luck, light, peace, spirit, freedom...? Is it any of thoes? If I've managed to get all five, give the points to Slytherin.
But good story! Its awsome so far, so please write the next chapter soon!

this is one of the best crossovers i have ever read please please update

This is very cool fic. Let me make that point from the outset. I like this fic. Ihaven't finished reading it, ubt I hope to high Heaven that you have finished it, so that I don't have to wait. (I'm selfish, I know). But one thing: 'Yes, in year two' translates to 'Oui, en la duexieme annee', at least to my knowledge. I admit my French sucks, but I'm pretty sure about this...

EXCELLENT! I wasn't expecting something this good; the plot goes deeper than expected. And it's fun.

And yet, what happened to the Chamber of Secrets? That still would have happened, whether or not Arty was in Hogwarts...I think, anyway. You ARE the author! :D

Amazing job, keep it up!

Icing :P