I really like your poem because it kind of like an anime that I know and love kingdom harts it's a really good anime and I love your poem.

I LOVED IT! Beautiful...

The last one doesn't rhyme
Would you write a poem fic (like a song fic) so it!

oh! i wuv elvish poems! :D they are so deep! and yours is no exception! its great, but i don't really know what a wayside is. lol, but other than my small knowledge of grammer, *or ...words..* its a great poem! make more! lol make a dwarfen poem! haha jk and i like the last line, it makes sense even today! :0 lol :D thank you for putting me on your favorites list! well i really liked your poem so guess what..!
YOUR GOING ON MY FAVORITES TOO! LOL! :D

*smiles* Very nice. I liked it.

That was a really really great poem! Have u written anymore since? well keep it up and submit any more that u have!

this poem was good... not! mine are soo much better. yourz is ok but you need to work on lines and stuff like how many sillables u put in
each line! when u fix it it will all be good.
cya later!
- Cordelia Buffy Greenleaf Potter -
ps elvez rock! ESPECIALLY LEGOLAS *HEART*
well at least u wrote about elvez.. since their the coolest.. so ur poem wasn't bad.
cya