Oh, dear, I thought you were going to kill Hakkai. Geez. I'm so glad you didn't. I liked the story, it was different and therefor interesting. Not bad written either.

I love you. I love you. I LOVE YOU!
You evil, evil **, you almost made me puke! But he didn't die... YAY!
uhn, very nicely written, good plot, good characterisations...
I hate you. >_< lol
See? I still can't decide whther I love your skill or hate it! lol!
mouse
PS: If I sound somewhat incoherent, forgive me. I just studied for my Phys test... For 5 hours straight!
*Huggles meethz* See ya in 2 weeks, hun!

WOW! Double that wow. WOWWOW!! Yours is very original! Thank you for sharing it with us saiyuki readers! :)

aiyah...couldn't sign in! i wanna add this to my fave list but sigh...nvm, i'll add in another time. ahh...38...my fave!!
i like ur story...no, i love it! wahaa...and im glad u didnt kill hakkai. arigato...
shikigami eh...very nice n original! woohoo... *chocolates for u*
do more do more... ganbatte yo (",)

I liked it very much! Definately something I haven't seen on ff.net before. Really well-written and suspenseful. Is that a word? Anyway, it was great ^_^

i really really like this fic. awesome. hakkai's one of my favourite charactrs too. haa

Hi meethzoonk,
I like the concept of this fic. If one had to kill the other... what would transpire? what would be said?
I guess when you realized you couldn't make this a death fic, that's the only part of the fic I have a problem with. First it sounded like Hakkai was of his own mind, but then it got turned around and Hakkai was wrong (or made to believe he wasn't under something else's control), but even the slightest hint that Hakkai was not himself might aid this story. If it were me writing, I'd have to contemplate what the hint could be, and then the story would probably never get written! So kudos for you for moving on and writing an intriguing story!

it's not bad... something different for a change.. ie, storyline. i'm quite glad too that hakkai didn't die :)
ah.. that's so typical of sanzo. he meant to kill him but didn't have bullets! would like to see more stuffs from you =p

Wow. Niceh!
I love good turns of situations that are unlikely in canon but just as likely to happen.
Is this a bit yaoi? Hm, could be just me. Powerful language and I love the contrast between the calm collectedness of Hakkai and the murderous fury of Sanzo. (He's not used to dealing with a tsunami of complex emotions: right and wrong, fellowship and justice all at the same time, is he? ^^)

Wonderful story! The imagery is very vivid. Very dark in the beginning, then turns much lighter at the end.
I agree, killing off Hakkai would have hurt us fangirls a bit too much. lol. =) Great job! I look forwards to more!
-Chrissy

This is really nicely done, the style plus the interactions weaves together to form a good story. You can get a sense of the suspense and fear, and the assuredness that Sanzo is going to kill Hakkai.
I'm glad you didn't kill Hakkai, I think the story came out better this way because it shows a facet of Sanzo's character. However, I'm sure you could've worked it out either way