Yea! More chappies! I'm sorry I didn't review ealier but it took awhile to find this fic. Silven is a DRAGON! O_O That was unexpected. Izzy and Yolei aren't in love anymore.. All well... But, now it's a Silven and Yolei couple, YEA! Also, I think you might of skipped a chapter between chapters 14 and 15. They don't line up. I was really lost... Let me show you.

This is how Chapter 14 ends:

“GO, GO, GO!” the man whipped the stallion with the remaints of the reins.

The chestnut horse leapt at a wild gallop, and began heading towards the dragon. Silven let go of the stirrups and kneeled on the saddle. When he was sure that he was balanced, the elf stood on the saddle, one foot front, the other back, and the reins being held by his long, slim fingers.

And this is how Chapter 15 begins:

The dragon was much smaller than the other two, perhaps half their size. It was a bright copper coloured reptiles, with a thin head, and a pair of intelligent, amber eyes. The wings were spread out, protecting the children from Shadow’s attack. It was a female dragon, staring defiantly at the two combatants, ready to react in case the black decided to attack.


See the leap? Anyway, Awesome 2 chapters. I can't wait for more, because it sounds like this story is wrapping up. Well see you and KEEP WRITING!

NO!1 CLIFFY! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!1 :'( Anyway, I so bet that the griffin is Taichi. I hope everything ends well. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's going to be great. See you and KEEP WRITING!

I'm reading your story!! Whenever I get a chance to. I like very much. It's a great story. Along with it's prequel, Copper Blaze... NO! Yolei is forgetting Izzy! The sadness extends... I wonder what is scaring Silven... I can't wait for the next chapter. It's going to be good! Well, see you and KEEP WRITING!

PS: You spelled mysteries wrong. It is 'M-Y' not 'M-I'.

Kara reads your story! She read both of them (Copper Blaze and Origins in Darkness)! It just took awhile to review... Always interuptted... But Kara really likes your story lots. Kara thinks it is great and can't wait for the next chapter. She hopes that everyone will be okay and wonders what Yolei is looking at... Anyway, see you and KEEP WRITING!

Dear Ireth Tasartir,
Thank you so much for updating. I saw that note you wrote at the bottom of this chapter. Wonderful job! I'll check in a little more often now, but don't worry about me asking you to update. I only do that an average of every 2-4 months that I haven't noticed any updates. Thanks again. I hope you had an incredible thanksgiving day and hope you enjoy the rest of the year. Keep up the good work.

Sincerely,
Alan

Please continue this story. I have read Copper Blaze and it was great, but had a sad ending. When this story continues, the ending of Copper Blaze could be replaced with a happier ending. Please, continue this story! Not just for me, but for any readers out there who are waiting. Just because they haven't left reviews doesn't mean they aren't interested. For all who knows, those people may be afraid of computer viruses. Thank-you! Please drop me an e-mail, alright? I'll keep in touch.

Sincerely,
Alan A loyal reader

God I wish you would update this story PLEASE?!?!?! ><

*gets down on hands and knees* please please please please update!

Rose: Keep the story going!
Trila: More! More!
Kate: You're only saying that because you want to know who the Werewolf is.
Trila: So? I'm a Australian Shepherd!
Melody: Like Kate, Allen, and I are cats and Dranzer and Phoenix are birds. Yeah, we know.
Rose: Okay. Anyway, get the next story going!
Trila: Check out her stories too!
Rose: Uh, Trila? Let HER decide if she wants to! Sorry about Trila, but the story going!

I like the story so far. Keep it up!

Cool story! Update soon.

Very interesting story! Post again soon, I can't wait to learn more about the charcters and their situation. Keep up the good writing.

MORE MORE MORE-
*Lights-Harp wacks GK over the head with a magazine*
Sorry you had to hear the start of that! I agree with my friend that you MUST write more! And could you please e-mail GK and tell her that you've writen more!
Great story so far!
GK: WRITE MORE MORE MORE!
LH: Argh, can't wait to read more!
~*~A very hyper GKFan and her very unfortunate friend Lights-Harp~*~

Interesting. Its a bit hard to follow though. It seems like there are big gaps in explanations. It would be easier to read and follow if you could clarify a little more. Other than that, this looks pretty good!

COLIOS!
write more son please!!