This so cute and it made my heart thud a little harder than usual! lol

Perfection! (*BTW, You are an amazingly good poet!*)

Keep writing! :)

This is a good plot. Do I get a cookie?

aww, that was so cute. great job.

ooh, do I love this. I never thought of this couple. =D

Aw! I love it!
Wonderful job!

=3
~arya minato and itachi

aw
The first Holes-Slash I read. Perfect *sight* ..^^

Gosh... this brought tears to my eyes because it's so sweet. I'm not one for such romance but this hooked my heart and reeled it in. I love it. It's so intense and powerful. And it being about Hector Zeroni and Stanley Yelnats.. is soo.. it just adds that much more.
Damn you nearly made me cry of happiness overflow I'll have you know..

That, is the first DECENT Holes slash I've read. Bravo. I want my cookie now.

wow im not into gay stuff but if i was i'd probably say sumthin like "that was very poetic" lmao good story though

email me at cuz u owe me a cookie





From - A girl who calls herself greg.

im not a huge fan of slash, but it wasnt that bad. for slash. ok now weres my cookie?

Love it! (cookie, please!)

Yours,
Klone

I want to know what the song is. The story was good, I wish my writing flowed like that. But the songs are always what catch my attention. ^^

ah!

LONG LIVE THE HOLES SLASH GIRLS!