I really like it. But i don't think Eric calls his Red 'sir'. at least, i've never heard it in the shows. i like it!

I forgot to review this when I first read it but you are gifted with songfics you are definitely an artist and you got the personalities pretty good too

this is the cutest little songfic i've seen in a really long time! keep up the good work!

This is really good. I think the whole how he looks thing was kind of off and the story was a bit confusing, but, all in all, really good. I'm just glad this is un-D/H!

I loved this story! You should definetly write more E/D stories!