Well, other than botching my name in the credits like a boof, I suppose you did a bang-up job here. However, you don't seem to be keeping any kind of schedule for your updates. You might want to try to work on that, I tend to lose interest eas-
Ooh, a butterfly!
Sorry, got distracted there. Anyway, thankfully your fic writing is far superior to your own personal hygine. Keep it up. The hygine too, but I mostly meant the writing.

tis good. i like it alot. but annie isnt mao's wife in the series is she? maybe im wrong, or maybe you jus wanted it that way. whatever, jus thought id point it out. keep writing! -ms

Hey I really like this story so far and hope that u will update it soon.
~Sakura~

An interesting journey into the past of everyone's favorite animé (It's your FAVORITE, you hear me?). What's the mission that will divide them? Does Julia *really* betray Spike?

aww damn! it is a cliffhanger, i was about to hit buttons so i could read more!! this is really interesting. Write more! I love Spike and Julia. Spike is funny. hehe..

Hey, not bad, I dig it. You could probably stand to be a bit more descriptive, but hey, I still like it.