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Reviews For: Subtlety
sexypancake 2004-10-09 . chapter 1
very cute! very sad and sweet at the same time! love the last line about daisuke being daisuke!
Sapphire Dragons 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
Thank God my Dai-kun isn't subtle. i mean, really, WOULD we have him any other way? and of course, the answer is no. great job.
~Faith
babydragon 2004-05-04 . chapter 1
why is it that i thought that it was sunfreak-sama who wrote this? ::hits self on head to stop the confusion::
but it was so sad, so sweet. miyako was very real, to me; the characterisation was really good. you're right, a subtle dai would not be dai at all. great fic. do some more, please!
brittie bear 2004-04-22 . chapter 1
awesome story once again
Angel of Peace 2004-01-18 . chapter 1
aw! fluffy goodness! I loved it!
Samanda Hime-sama 2003-12-29 . chapter 1
COngrats. I really liked this story. It made me cry... Keep up the good work, Nine1!
Higuchimon 2003-12-28 . chapter 1
That's rather sweet. I enjoyed the portrayal of Miyako most of all. I believe that's how she'd be if this had happened. Glad for her friends, but somewhat sad for herself. It's good to see her written properly. The Daisuke-characterization was also good. He really isn't all that subtle. That's Ken's department. :)
Though it is a bit odd that Miyako's first reaction is described as shrieking angrily, and then she just seems to be suddenly accepting it. Most of the story gives me the mental impression that she was just standing there in shock, not yelling.
One other thing...it was AMAZINGLY refreshing not to have the cliche Takari on the side.
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