AHH this story is so cute, I really like it! I like all of your characters. Keep Going!

good story, please update soon

hey
really liked the story, can't wait for it to finish. I think u need more of a discription of what the charectors look like, especially Jamie. hope u keep writing.
good luck

You're writing is very good...just try to space things out. Because on the site it's in big big clumps and hard to follow. Just hit the enter/return key twice every four to five sentences and it'll be easier to read. Keep up the nice work.

Hey, to anyone who is reading the reviews, I'm sorry that it has nothing to do with the movie, but I just wanted to put it on the site for others to read. I want to know how good I am at writing, and I need opinions from people. Please R&R! I hope you like it!