Please update soon...I like your story very much.

Wow, i guess i'm the first reviewer of 2005, hehe i feel special. This is such a great story, i can't believe i missed this in the Pretear section. Anyways, please update! I want to know more about this mysterious girl and her...erm...mysterious ways...xP
~Invisible Love

UPDATE!!

o I likie!

yeah, really really cool fic!
Mannen and Kitsu rock!
update soon plz.

hey this looks awfully familiar to someone who wrote a pretear fanfic as well...pls if you are trying to copy pls do not do so...and anyway the other writer has a better story...

Wow,i luv your story! ^^can't wait till the next one comes out!

Hee, this is really good!

OC?! Original Characters? Umm.. you should have out that yuou had OC in the summary of your fic. It's not good to decieve people like that.. Owari
~KazeShinai

i likies your ficies! plz updaties!

I love it plz keep writing. I hope you have fun writing this story. Later Days =^_^=

Aw, poor girl. I feel so sorry for her. But that was funny. "It's like they had sex." I away thought of preting like that, but whatever. Good chapter. You should write longer ones though, cause it was getting interesting.

Hey! I like the story so far. I hope you update soon. I also hope you will check out my pretear story as well.
Update soon ^^

I love it I hope you write more for this story. I hope that you will read and review my stories. And I wish you a happy writing day Later Days =^_^=

Interesting New Pretear. How is Hayate coming to cope with pret-ting with a new pretear if he really loves Himeno? What will Himeno feel if a new Pretear is selected? Great beginning. I hope you write tons more! I can't wait to see where you go next with it.

Nice...
continue and tell me when u did that