great story

great story

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Actually a very good story. Well handled, a nice twisted ending with quite a shock. One thing you left out though, what started him killing again? There is usually a stressor that reactivates the urge to kill so what was it? Also did Tiner kill his father too? Or did his father figure out the kid had done it?

It sounds to me that your FBI Agents are just Mulder and Scully with new names. It may have been better had you just made this a crossover. It is a good story though and you wrote it well.

Please write the 3rd one soon! I LOVE it!

hahaha, whats wrong with Sa? He's cool. Loved the story. It took a while to read, but still loved it

hey... boy am i glad i happened to be checking for stories i hadn't read yet! wonderful story... loved everything about it (especially the refrences to another well known pair of partners!) thanks a lot for a great story!

great! do a sequel

the story was very good. I liked the relationship between Harm and his cousin. would have been better if there was more of a relationship between Harm and Mac (ooo suprise surprise)

I thought the story was good but I think a better one would be if something happend to Mac and Harm had to save her.

I really liked this story because it showed that Harm's family is really funny.

Great story!