   Princess-Lalaith 2007-10-19 . chapter 14Ah!
Deffinitely not the best place to end this.
I'm so glad you've written the sequel already. And I hope you've finished that one, or you'll have one not-too-happy gal here.
See ya! |
| Princess-Lalaith 2007-10-19 . chapter 4 Just to let you know, you repeated chapter. Here should be chapter three, not chapter two again. |
 Sarah 2004-01-05 . chapter 14 o come on what a cliff hanger :S! ERG damn u lol jkz its too good.. |
| Britt 2004-01-05 . chapter 14 O please update soon. I can't wait till I read the next chapter. |
| Selphie 2004-01-05 . chapter 14 NO Poor Angel! How could Connor do that to our favourite vampire? Well i hope Buffy gets to him intime and manages to smack some sense into her son!
*nods* yep that's all from me! |
| Britt 2004-01-04 . chapter 12 Please update soon |
| Rising From The Ashes 2004-01-03 . chapter 12 This is great! Please post more, soon!! |
| Britt 2004-01-02 . chapter 7 Very interesting please contiune with this story. |
| CF 2004-01-02 . chapter 7 This is great,keep going. |
| mambo_no_5 2004-01-02 . chapter 6 lease write more I love it, but I dont want connor to come back older maybe if he came back like 4 or something. But not like he did in the show. Please update1 I love this story! xx |
| Britt 2004-01-02 . chapter 6 Hey great chapter. Please continue with this story. |
| buffy 2004-01-01 . chapter 6 keep going |
| ecstasy_of_grief 2003-12-31 . chapter 5 please post more soon, i love this series |
| buffy101 2003-12-31 . chapter 4 continue. the story great so far |
| Diane LD 2003-12-31 . chapter 4 Heh. ::sheepish grin:: I can't help but feel many of those authors notes are directed at me. Looking back on that review, I realize I was being a bit bitchy. So forgive me. I could have been a little nicer, especialy since this is your first fic.
Well, I won't be leaving another one like that, because well, I can't really think of anything bad to say. Buffy is characterized much, much more realisticly in this story-- quite nicely, actully. Buffy, as a character, is moody, bitchy, and emotional-- and with her son being taken, 'space' seems to be the thing she would ask for. I like how she temporarily needed to move back home in a traumatic time-- it shows chracter weakness she hasn't gotten over yet, residue from her younger days. She is also one to hide her true feelings, which you do nicely. I liked the Xander convo.
The timeline is a little confusing. But I get it. I think.
Keep going. And even if dirty flamers like me tell you stuff, don't listen. :)
-D
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