 Captian Lady Sparrow 2004-05-19 . chapter 1that was a very good storrie thingy but it makes you think and thats realy good thing |
 Jen 2004-02-29 . chapter 1 YES! I DEFINATELY want sequels! *tear drops* that was really sad...how do you come up with these things? *sniffle* that was great...update soon! |
 Amarie, magical elf 2004-02-25 . chapter 1what's gonna happen next? ye need to tell me *tears rolling down my cheeks* it's beautiful, but keep going! |
 Spiritless-Angel 2004-02-17 . chapter 1This is great! but i want more... |
 Jacksrumrunner 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Oh god, It was so beautiful |
 emma436 2004-01-23 . chapter 1*tear* |
 Nosilla 2004-01-05 . chapter 1 O_O Don't leave me in suspence! what happens? |
 BlackPearl07 2003-12-29 . chapter 1i like it so far but you'll have to add more before i can tell |