Wow, I've never seen something like this before. Cool fic!character

that was really cute. poor joey is always being called a dog. but i think dogs are cute to though. iit bepends on your point of view. perhapes kiaba's not as mean as he seems, maybe he's complmenting joey.(i know ew)

what a sweet story, so sad though...
would you consider adding another chapter?

We e e e e ^_^
I just love Jou x Mai .
I love y0or fic !

poor jou great fic

short, sweet, and sad. thats wut i can say for now.

oh... poor Jou. ;_; so sad.
I quite like the way this is written. Following his thoughts like this, his paranoia makes so much sense.
Also love the little bit about how when he's upset, he eats. That's a nice bit of realism. ^_^
--KFC

Loving the last sentance. Way to keep Joey in character!

that was nice!you have to put up a next chappy!i'll wait for it!see ya!:)

More, more, more!

Interesting. YAY JOEY AND MAI! GO Joey/MAi