heya! so sad! but its ok, since you never went OOC at all, which is GREAT! keep it up

This is really good, but you have to write more! I mean, Robin has to find out that he is not in love with Starfire and that he likes Raven, he then has to tell her and they live happily ever after. But then again this is your fanfic, not mine, I'll just do mine like that, anyway, I did like the beginning of it, the end was just a little... upsetting, thats all

Bored11

(i dont like the robin raven relationship (as my profile says))

This is really good, you just need to go through re-read it. There are alot of grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and typos. Your brain works faster than your fingers, like so many of the greats. Good job!

Another great story! Very in-character, for everyone. I love the salsa-eating contest too; how come they've never done that on the show? Thanks for this take on the RobRae relationship; if there really was one, it would probably be just like this.

*sniff* Poor Raven. My heart was breaking for her right then. I don't know how she kept hold of herself so well seeing them like that. Nice job.

Excellant, simply excellant. Your characterization, dialogue, and descriptions are all top-notch. I support this Teen Titans fanfic!

aww that was sad in the ending. its a great story i totally love it. i love the way you show raven's point of view and how she struggles with her emotions. i should know i have a just as hard time. showing how she chose to conceal her feelings...its excellent. your an amazing writer!

sorry...i dont feel like logging in right now... anyway, nice job. It is definately angst though. It is way past drama. I love how you described her heart bleeding. Well done.

hey, sorry if my reveiw was bad b4... i was just kidding, i love this fic, theirs really nothing wrong with it. good writing sorry i was in a mean mood that day. teen titans is cool and ur fic is good, especialy the parts with raven beast boy, cute

Not bad. Not bad at all.

WOW! Just wow. The characterization is good, the writing is subtle...
This is a very good take on the R/R romance, if it exists, which I doubt.
*points at cordeliabuffygreenleafpotter's review* That is funny! You have so much to make fun of there, I'm not sure where to start.
Okay, how is your writing any good if you don't even spell properly in your reviews? Not to mention your grammar. It's called a comma, dearie. Use it.
Also, do you really think that someone is going to read their flamer's stories and enjoy them? If so, you are so stupid it's incredible.
By the way, Legolas's last name is Thranduillion, meaning "son of Thranduil", not Greenleaf. Greenleaf is a translation only.
And Legsie is a STUPID nickname. How could you be that cruel to give one of such a noble race that kind of name? Nevermind, I won't go into that part of a fangirl's mind.
eventidespirit, keep writing. I love your work. *scampers off to read the rest*

hello hun
i have 2 words.. this sucks! i dotn like it it scared me- to see some beter stories come to meine-maybe itll help u- i feel bad for u and want u to write good like me!
bbye-
~cordelia
legsie rulz!

That was brilliant. Well written, good characteration, and an excellent plot. Plus, this IS the Robin/Raven relationship, if it exists at all. (Which I sincerly doubt ^-~) I'm glad you wrote this...it was REALY good.
Much love, Melody

Nice. This is a clever take on the whole Raven/Robin thing, and I like the fact that you understand it probably won't happen.
Do I sense a hint of R/BB at the end there? Spiffyful!
Love and blessed be,
The Hakuneko Yajuu