okay you suck... in a good way? O.o? i feel better not good but better thanks to you... ^.^ thank you...

Woah! this like blew my reality(made my head explode)
I wasa reading this really late and i think that was made me so confused cuz it was late and i am tired. BUT. I. CANT. STOP. READING. AGH!
this was pwnsome(I hear people say that a lot but i have no idea what it means) all well:)
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i was a bit confused hear and there but dont worry it hit me like a ton of bricks l8ter.


I LIKIE! U SHOULD PUT IN A 3 PART SERIES!

='.'=

that was really brilliant. just... nice.
the beginning confused me a little though and the transition were off- my head didn't quite get round it until the end.

i think you should just make these into a humongous series. I'm not too partial to yaoi but this was done tastefully! good job

I already read sadder stories, but for some reason I cried, reading yours I don't know why but I think it speaks for itself.

What a ** up story!! How can you pair him up with that ** of a girl...

It's so cliche..I mean, the sister die, so, obviously, the sister that supposely HATES him, marries him..Oh please..What a stupid ** story and ending!!

Eh, I had some trouble differenciating between what was happening since there were no breaks or anything... but I got it and it was good. Very good! Nice job!

Incredibly nice closure to your two-shot. Anbure ending up with Seiya was a little predictable, but there's nothing wrong with that. :) I loved it, possibly even more than the first.

aww. how sweet! i absolutely LOVE Seiya! One of the best OCs in a while!! I lked her better than Sarana though, no offense, but the sweet and Sakura identical thing gets a bit annoying. I especially loved how Seiya asked Anbure to marry her! GO SEIYA!1

i'll never figure out how you can make romance sound so angsty... seriously. this was good... if a little confusing.

i'm not sure now if i read the original or another polished version. in the one i read, it ended with sakura giving sight to anbure and seiya's first child, and sasuke grumbles about being a grandfather at 36 years old.

frankly, i liked that one better and thought it flowed better. the layout for this version seems a bit messy too. there's not enough spaces or breaks between the jumps in the story and viewpoints.

Ok I'm really confused about this story and the one before it Anbure.It makes no sense to me can you please explain it to me?

kya! So beautiful!

that was sad when you killed off sarana, but i guess it didnt end too badly
nice story!

hm kinda gross that she married her sisters (ex?)husband... i would definitely feel wierd... oh well, great story ^_^ sequal? *puppy eyes lol