very good, very sweet. my only grpie is that it seemed a tad rushed. but this is Duo and Hilde were're talking about. Thery're not the take-it-slow kind of people. Anybody who knows these characters will be able to atribute the rushed-ness of this fic to their personalities. But you know, just disregard evrything i said about the rushing of the fic. this is a great story.

HEY! This is a cute story. I am surprised no one else has reviewed it yet. It is really sweet. I like the idea, but, maybe you could slow it down a little...make it a little more intimate. Other than that, good job! I hope you update soon!
~Chao!

Those thugs gave up without a fight! Hehehehe... go Duo! I liked this story...very rainy really, and nice 'n sweet too. Adios! Sakura123~