The writing was very well and played like a movie in my head.
I love the love interest (Ari, or atleast that is what I am hoping) being in high school.

Oh my God It's so cute.

It's so good ! So fun.
Oh, the phrase “Can’t talk right now, Grissom. I’m getting married.” So good.

ok... I love that you posted a part of Lost and Found's "Lions"... that song is the best. I love you! And your story. It's awesome.. in fact, I'm gonna go finish it now.

OMG! I absolutely loved that story.
I read the end and couldn't stop grinning.
Thnx for that.

much applause, my dear. but again, i beta for you, remember? lol. ciao, lio.
~Drac

Fantastic! You kept the story interesting and suspenseful. I couldn't stop reading it!

That was such a great story! Good job!

This story was awsome!! Umm a sequel would b cool to read if you did one

SEQUEL! Need I say more? Great job by the way!

Aw! Great ending. Sadness that's it's over, though. I like the poem at the end too. Can't wait to read more of your work!

*sobbing* THAT WAS SO SWEET! GREG IS SUCH A SWEETIE! But the baby died! :`( Well, I kinda knew it would. I mean, a baby could never survive being stabbed, especially when it hasn't even been born yet. Oh well! It was still a sweet and happy ending! ~^_^~ GREAT WONDERFUL FANTASTIC GOOD JOB ON THIS STORY! Totally rocked! LOVED IT! Hehehe I'm gonna check out your other stories. They'll probably rock as well. Au revoir Dare-Soñar-sama!

O.O Please don't let her die! PLEASE! V_V if she does, Greg will be sad! And a sad Greg is NOT good! It's bad! *sobs* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! DAMN CLIFFHANGERS!

lol! EMPEROR'S NEW GROOVE! Funniest cartoon Disney movie ever! lol! and yes, that's exactly what i'm thinking, "MORE plot twists?! ARGH!" lol

STRONG BAD ROCKS! ^_^ hehehe nice chapty, i'm gonna read more now