The poem is really good I love it. you should write more! Oh by the way, my name really is Sarah, sarah wong. I think we hav quite alot in common actually. poeple think i'm a pyscho cos' I hav this sort of wierd creep people out stare, and I love books.

You are a great poet. You poem is so...cool? No, I eman Excellent!

I must inform that I am neither a poet,
or do I know much about poetry. Therefore, I
will say what I say about anything that I am
not to clear on. It was good. I like your
other fics as well.
The man laughs well Jessica Simpson eats the
Digimon with electric knives and,
X3 Polk v0:1 listens to the birds sing
songs.

Superb! It's very descriptive and captures Hao's slight pyromaniac tendencies well. I'd pick out a favorite verse but I like it all too much.

WOW! It's good! I write poems and understand that's tough to know when a poem is good or not, but let me tell you, it IS a good-no!- excellent poem!
^_^