 sassy-diva2004 2005-08-13 . chapter 5wow, sounds really good. finaly i've found a fic that focuses on rei and NOT usagi. This is great. |
 MariKris 2005-02-02 . chapter 5fantastic fic, UPDATE! |
 SVZ 2004-11-05 . chapter 5I know how you feel- decided to play around with the document manager and etc. *sighs*
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed since forever! *hugs you* It seems like you're the only one writing Trunks/Rei now ^^; (although I'm working on my revised version of WITWDIDTDT). |
 DTN 2004-10-24 . chapter 5;_; I'm sorry for not reviewing, I've been sadly dead in the fanfiction world but if it's to read your work then I'm happy to come back to life! I admit it was short but it was to the point. Great... more people to freak me out -_-; But it was a nice chapter. I hope to see some Trunks/Rei fluff because I miss them. *sobs* Keep up the great work onee-san! ^_^
~DTN |
 Princess Ren 2004-10-14 . chapter 5You posted! You actually posted! I'm really really happy! It was short but it still great! So the enemy is having some background... I just hope you post more chapters in such a short time! Though I don't blame you if you are busy... hehehe... just post chapter 6 soon okay!? I wanna see more Trunks/Rei romance! There is very few fics that have this couple... I'm very sad about that... oh well! As long as I can read a Rei/Trunks fic I'm satisfied! ^_^ Hope you post soon! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
 thescientist 2004-09-18 . chapter 4 a bit dark but I think the pace this chapter was going, was really quick. this just made rei's chaarcter seem like it was gradually changing or having wild mood swings - really realistic. I don't know, maybe I'm the only one who thinks so?
Oh well. I really like your descriptions at the end about her past self. It just made the whole chapter come into more focus - clearer and connected the story nicely. I hope to see a next chapter soon! And I'm sorry I couldn't be more helpful in reviewing! |
 Firenze 2004-08-29 . chapter 4Ack.. you sneaked in a review on me. But it was very good. Weird doctors and gross delivery men. I really liked this chapter, full of intrigue. Good length too, not to short or long. Looks like things are starting to come together. |
 Princess Ren 2004-08-23 . chapter 4Hey! I'm glad that you had finally posted chapter 3! I thought you had discontinued the fic! It would be a shame if you do that... Luckily you didn't! The chapter was great! It's beginning to have shape! So what would the scouts gonna do about this new enemy! You better post the next chapter as soon as possoble! By the way, call me anything you want... it's okay to me! ~_^! hehehe... hope you have long chapters like this! It's worth the wait! ^_^ Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
 Princess Ren 2004-06-18 . chapter 3What!? That's it! You left us there with only that!? It's been 6 months and it's short! I love your story... really...! I just hope you post the next chapter as soon as possible! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
 Firenze 2004-06-18 . chapter 3yay! you updated! this is a great story. the german guy is awesome!! i wanna german guy... like Schuldig from Weiß Kreuz!! Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. |
 SVZ 2004-06-15 . chapter 3^^ I love this fic so far... *glomps* You updated! *squeals* I dun like Michael... *growls at him* |
 DTN 2004-06-15 . chapter 3You updated!! *Glomps* Lovely written. I see this creepy guy is pulling a Jadeite. And if I'm correct, I will recreate this guy doujinshi form and bash him til days on end. Lovely detail and character. I loved this alot because I admitt, I haven't been in this section so it's nice to read something. Great work onee-san. Keep it up!
~DTN (rare/dead reviewer) |
 DTN 2004-02-05 . chapter 2CHAPTER! XD
Do I feel stupid for not reviewing? Yes. Leave me!
I loved this chapter! I see that Mirai is becoming... not as serious type now... Cute Kotono reaction there. I liked the fluff too. ^^ Man, I'm an idiot.
Yayness for Orlando Bloom! I hope you continue, it's a great start. It's a big change going from first person to third person. Keep up the great work onee-san!
~DTN (the rare reviewer)
And... I will update... |
 T 2004-02-05 . chapter 2 That was brilliant, can't wait to see where you go with this.
Dark Mars
P.S. You mentioned Orlando Bloom, my absoluetly favourite actor on Earth, yay! |
 SVZ 2004-01-02 . chapter 2^_^ I love this fic so far... I think this is your first Mirai Trunks/Rei fic written in third person, ne? ^^ It's an interesting change from first person, though in my opinion, I find 1st person easier to write.
I love your dialogue and how easy-going and flowing the conversation between Trunks and Rei are. You add a lot of great detail too ^-^
I think I found a mistake though... you said Trunks was in his Juuban uniform, and it kinda implies that he goes to the same school as Usagi and everyone (and you later added it was an all-boys school). I think you had another school in mind, and if you elaborated on the school somehow or changed the name of the uniform or something, it'll make me less confused.
I also think that using Kate's Japanese name (Kotono, I believe) would add a nice touch because all the senshi have Japanese names.
Great work on the fic though! ^^ I can't wait for you to update. This means I have to bug DTN to update.. ^-^ 22 days until our birthday! |