This is lovely...make this longer and make me happy! I think I may go crazy before I get my paws on book 13...
~Linz~

Wow! What a fabules piece about Mokuren. I can really understand and relate to what she is saying and how she feels. Really good.

wow, this is really good, and i don't like mokuren at all! this is one side of her, and this is awesome! WOW! this is GREAT!
the way i usually depict her is the snotty(kinda) perfect daddy's little girl who's used to getting her own way and loves to be in the center of attention. thanks for showing me the other (possible) side!
you think you can write someone like this for Shion?

deep...i can relate...alot...can you write more?...maybe of different stories for other charecters.maybe?...

You really described Mokuren's feeling so well. Her thought, her feeling, her love. A deep introspective of being a Kiches. Good story really.