wow i dont know how but its keeps getting beta and beta now im off to read the next one :) congras great writing :)

yay im finally on ur third story !! ive read ur last two non stop!

Ah - evil cliffie!
Now I have to read on. Ah well at least I'll won't be sidetracked tomorrow then, savvy?
Great story!

Hi,
I just wanted to finally drop a review. I'm so immensely glad I came across your stories. I'm completely hooked. I'll probably stay up all night to read the very last chapter. (So much for getting work done (:)
I just read your response to the Mary-Sue accusation. And that made me take the time to write the long overdue review.
I enjoy your storie I think it is well devised and well written. And I agree there are horrible stories out there - and yours is surely NOT one of them!
On the Mary-Sue business - I agree it is hard not to write one. I just want to mention that real life can be sometimes quite "Mary-Sueish" itself. Believe me some of the events that happen right under our nose are Hollywood-worthy. In fact so much in terms of drama and romance that if you saw them in a movie or read about them you'd immediately discard them for being unrealistic. But that doesn't change the fact they happened.
So, why am I rambling on about that? Because I think that you take great care to make this story realistic. You try hard to think up a plausible plot and write the characters. All good reasons, why this story is not to be counted among Mary-Sue-Stories.
In my opinion you can get caught up way too much in Mary-Sue paranoia and start overreacting.
Let's face it everyone, if you scrutinize hard enough - every story becomes Mary-Sue/Gary-Stuish. Because as I said real life has said moments.
To end this, let me summarize: great story, hilarious scenes again and again, good characterizations - keep it up you're doing a good job!

I love your Kitty Groves series. I've just started chapter one of part three. It so addictive, it should be illigal.

I loved this Hils.

My most sincere compliments to you and Mulberry both. (:

ta

Insanely brilliant Hils.

Dunno how you come up with it each time.

:D

amore

I can't believe Mary left behind a baby and a husband! But being the ** and ** she is... I believe it.

I love how Clara flipped out. Pricless. :D

I love getting dressed up! But I could hardly walk with that many jewels on me. Especially in Tortuga.

A perfectly decedan( sp?) evening. (:

This Hallam guy- kinda odd. But he's ok.

I dunno. Pirate!

:D :le sigh: on with the partay. :D

Those last lines had me giggling.

:D

Ah, to be rescued.

:D HOORAY!

Boy things are going wrong left and right!
I didn't realise how little Kitty was really, can't see over the wheel.

LOL. :D

Oh good they are safe!

::CHEERS:

:HANDS YOU A LOVELY JACK SPARROW DOLL:

:D