interesting, is Carter Faith? I'm a little confused on that lol but then again it is 11 o'clock here and my eyes are kinda heavy. Are you using that as a last name?

hey where's the next chapter already it's been forever come on you cant just leave us like this and dont continue if that is what ur doing give us a heads up so i can stop getting my hopes up for an update

Hey

I love that Chapter. As well as the story so far. I can’t wait to read more. Please keep up this great story.

Violet44

Really like this concept. Please upload the next chapter,quickly

Update PLEASE!
FAITH RULES!!

Interesting story so far! Add more soon!

your story is great keep writng! Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next.

Wowies! I'm gonna like this fic! Continue, please?
[LunarFaerie]

Cool! this is really good! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens!
Love Megan

Really like the idea ! Doing a great job ~ Keep it up !

Oh, come on, UPDATE! I LOVE IT! Could you possibly bring Spike into the story? *fangirl scream* lol jk UPDATE!

Ohmigosh! FINISH!

interesting change, what ever you do don't get Faith and angel together over it. get Faith to go her own way.
Great start of your fic keep the chapters coming

This is something of a departure for you, Cloud. I like it very much so far. You know whom I'm hoping to see in an upcoming chapter, don't you? Of course you do. An old friend of Darla's.

Not bad. I don't mind the lyrical as long as it fits with the piece, and this one does. Just make sure you keep control of the style. You did a good job this chapter. Do me a favor and leave the disclaimer that the concept was mine in your disclaimer section each chapter. Thankage.