"My master... will be pleased... when he learns... of your demise."

I read this line and started laughing... Did you notice it's poetic? 3 syllables for almost all the phrases and the 2 and 4 lines rhymed.

Oh! And the real review of the story. It plot was different than what I expected, but awesome none-the-less. I sort of wish that you had put Older Harry in the epilogue though.

One MAJOR problem- It's near impossible to tell which Harry you're talking about almost always. You could use some page breaks in your chapters to aide in that.

Overall, this was an awesome story, just not quite a favourites list one. I'll take a look at 3003!

Thanks for the great read!

Wonderful story. It has been an honor to have been able to read it in its entirety.

wow :D very nice. sad and disturbing harry becoming a better person through the story, classy.

This story is really interesting. At first I didn't think that I would like it, but as I read on its grown on me, and I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering whats going to happen next.

I love the way this story is going. I hope to find out more about Older Harry, and why hes such a prat now. haha

Excellent story. But I must say, it was really confusing in the beginning. I think my head still hurts. ^^

Will read Sequel.

Right this is way too confusing, im tryin to understand but it's just not penetrating my brain

great fanfic, I can't believe how few reviews you've gotten! Thanks for the fic!

Katy

woah! this story was awesome! loved the battle scenes, and everything was so intense! very well written!

Good story! I loved it to pieces.

Love ^^

Good chapter but Harry should just use his power and really take care of business.

gunny

Good chapter. time to kick some bad guy butt.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Very good.

gunny

Bummer.

gunny