Oh, just beautiful! Your characterization of Peter was perfect, especially his all-business attitude about his own laws. The setting is wonderful, and heightens the drama. Why haven't you updated in so long? *Weeps*

one word CONTINUE NOW!! ok actually thats two..but oh well

Excellent start - please don't abandon this!

please continue!

OMG! I LUV THIS! OMG! OMG! PLZ CONTINUE! PLZ! This has gotta b 1 of my fave stories!
can't wait 4 more!
luv
Supergurl1

You need to update more. Your stories are facinating!

Love it!

Very cool, can't wait for the next one!!

Oh yay! This will be so awesome! Away to Neverland they go! I can't wait to see what happens with this new foe and everything! You must update sooner than you are right now! *wink* Please I want to know what is going to happen to them! You must hurry! This is so cool!
MLA
Namaarie
Shauna

I Love It! The only other thing I can say is...UPDATE SOON!

This is really good. I like it, but I think you made some errors concerning the history aspect. I'm pretty sure that there weren't blitz attacks during World War I because the planes weren't advanced enough (if memory serves me right, the military only used bi-planes). Other than that, I thought it was excellent. I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Your writing is wonderful! I love the story, you must update, I'll be eagerly awaiting!

hooray! good good good! Thank you ever so much for writting a peter and wendy story, it was fantastic!

This is good so far, but it's too early for me to put down any long, deep comments. Maybe in a few chapters. :)
~Haley, awaiting the next chapter

This is really good, you must continue!