What is this, I can't even read it.

I cant even think of a decent enough way to describe this. Its like **, only after its been eaten by a goat and vomited up again. Learn how to use ellipses. And if the fic is so badly written that you have to put a /key/, then you know you have issues. Another thing I have problems with is this sentence:

"Venus does not Never Again by who cares, and if you sue her, then a giant medabot will crush you."

I take it you're Venus, but what the hell does "does not Never Again by who cares" mean? And keep your fandoms stright. If you wanna make a threat (yours, by the way, is **), at least use the same fandom. [DBZ= Chi Chi's frying pan, Digimon= a digimon, therefore Gundam Wing= a GUNDAM.]

Next time, try to tone down the suckage factor and overall **-ness of the fic, dont throw in a overused plot (assuming one can call it that), and its just LAME to invite people to flame you. Its even more lame if you really /really/ deserve it.

-Kinaua

...that was pointless. And damn messy.

FLAME this is a lame storie
NNOT!
I LOVE IT

*FLAME!* *FLAME (again)* ...Sorry but you dared... and I can never go out on a dare! (Naw it was cute ^.^)
~Mako