Hey I've been reading these stories and I think they are great! A lot better than I could do. Don't feel bad about not having the spirit summoning spell the same as the show. Granted that spell always stayed the same the ones for calling a lost witch and summoning the powers changed. The same spell was once the summoning powers spell then it became the lost witch spell. Don't know if you ever noticed that. So that being said I wouldn't feel bad. lol. I can't wait to finish this story and get working on the others. Happy writing, and good luck!

This was also a great story.

I cant' wait to read the next one! I read this one and half of you last one in one night, I suppose I really like this story, huh? lol.

yay another great story, gonna start readin the third one now

i love your story! there are only a couple of things thsat bothered me...
1.) whitelighters can heal themelves...
2.) "i think baby wants mommy to be indestructable..." (piper) the baby protects piper, because it's a whitelighter.
3.) i think thats its just that you are a whitelighter or you arent. paige is a whitelighter AND a witch.
4.) bane would still be concidered a warlock, because warlocks are the male version of witches. You kind of did that, but you kept calling him a witch, and it bothered me...

other than those things, i liked your story.You are a really good author, and should be proud of yourself.
Kaze

same thing highly recommending you..lol

I do not mind if u ever stop u have real gift so show it ok well got to go to bed I have been reading since 6:30 this mornig since I descovered it last night and it was all I could think about so now it is 1:00 in the morning ad I am dead dog tired so I will start again when I get up on the next one... so good night or shoud it be good morning...

good story

sweet sappy story!
Loved It!!

Wow, it's a beautiful story, so sad.
It's really impressive.
Thank you for sharing your talent and this amazing story.

OMG OMG this story is so so sad...what is goin to happen to piper write more soon! And what would Leo do if Piper dies...o so so sad...

This story is amazing just like FBTH I'm moving on to RTH? Hope its just as good
I knd of like the format you have this in with one big chapter and sort of little subchaps

Hey. Wow. I read your other story, FHTB, but ff.net wouldn't let me review. This is truly amazing, it really is. You're so great. But a little medical advice. If the mother is in a coma and she's as far gone as Piper they would normally perform an emergency ceaserean (sp?)to get the baby out instead of putting it in more danger by letting it remain in the womb. You can actually deliever the baby when the mother is dead. Not that that will happen... Will it? Please no! You can't kill any of them... *Pout*
Charmed Leo

I really liked this story. I couldn't stop reading it. Hope to see the sequel soon.

i love this story
please make andy and prue be togheter again
it's my favourite couple
please
i found it sad how they two ended
i love the rest of the story
update realy soon
i realy can't wait. one of the best story's
*yay*