** this story is good! I'm onto chapter 38, i love it!

Bill Denbourgh! From stephen kings IT, he was the leader of the group of kids who fought against IT and became a famous writer when he grew up. His little brother georgie was killed by IT, and his wife Audra was kidnapped by her also. WOOT.

Interesting chapter. I few spelling errors but overall pretty good.

P.S. If you get the chance check out my Silent Hill fic "Justice". Thanks.

this is truly brilliant work.

Just finished reading the last chapter. Man what a story! So the beginning where Jobe and Phil were coming in the car was Jobes imagination, Phil was never there eh? Very cool indeed, and he spent half the story looking for him... I would never have quessed it was a lie. Now those Eddies words come back to me.. "Sin, ** man we all got it" That line was just brilliant!

I was looking for seeing Eddie and Maria one last time at the end but it didn't happen... There should have been a scene where Virgil, Jobe and Grace go to join them in that room...now that theyre all the same...dead!

anyways really cool story, even though it took some unnecessary lenght. Or should I say over descriptive?

Wow. When I started reading, I thought it would just be another SH fic, but it's one of the best stories I have ever read. At all. I hope you continue to write such good fics. Now that it's done, I have to go back and read every chapter of this over again.

Wow... Just wow. You have a way to wrap things up my friend. I must say I never saw that comming...
I'm kinda sad that after all that jobe went through that he still didn't win in the end, but it is cool how you deepened Claudia so much! (How did Claudia meet Heather and torment Jobe at the same time? Or what happened? You need to make another post explaining that just a tad more... Or you could just blame it on the fluxuating time in Silent Hill..;)
You had better keep writing SH Fanfiction, or I'm sure lots of people will be disapointed. (especially me!)

I want to give my compliments, but what is there that hasn't been said?...

WO! Though ive never reviewed I have been following the story since you started it and it was FANTASTIC! Not many people have mangaed to get the essence of the perversity of silent hill so accurately and the ending was mind blowing. I neversaw the whole Jobe thing coming! Its kind of sad that its gone now too :( Ah well, I hpoe you make another fic!

*wipes tears away and joins the roaring applause*

That was just pure perfection. So depressing how everyone except Heather ended up dead and doomed, but many of the best stories out there don't have happy endings either. And this was definitely one of the best, most addictive and clever stories I have ever had the pleasure of following through all its 53 chapters. I can't thank you enough for writing it.

Also, I really loved the way you directly adressed the reader in those last paragraphs ("we", "us"). It's a very unusual technique, but it works perfectly in this tale.

Anyway, I should stop gushing now, although this was a highly gush-worthy work, and an incredibly promising debut. Like the rest of your readers, I'm looking forward to any upcoming stories from you.

The town of Silent Hill has won over their sin..Such a sad tale...beautifully written. bravo..I look forward to all other future fics. Best of luck! :)

And here I thought it was over, but I'm glad all the loose ends are for the most part tied up now. I must say, for a first-time work, your talent is utterly phenomenal. At least in my opinion, and that of several other readers, I'm sure. Once again, I must thank you for providing me with such a phenomenal story to read. I only regret that I couldn't do the same for you in return.

Thank you, and until next time, farewell...

Thank you for the best peice of literature i have ever read in my entire life.

Wow. Just... wow. That was awsome. What a way to finish, too. It felt just like that: closure. Many times I read fics and they are really good, but the ending is very bad or just poor in general. Yours was fitting, an excellent touch.

I swear, you should write a book. I would so read it. ^_^

pretty intense and so sad...very cool on the emotion vibes you write... :D