This was a kick ** story, as are all of yours! Duh! I love Neville/Luna! How sweet they would be together. J. K. Rowling should really just get you to write the last book! That's how good you are.

wow. That's all I can say to describe how great this story is...wow.

Whoo. What a story. Very interesting plot to say the least, loved the Neville/Luna pairing. Only slight eensy-weensy little thing (this ISN'T a flame, I promise) was the whole "doing it outside in the snow" thing. I thought this story had a "K" rating, so for future reference, you might want to up the rating to maybe "K+" or "T". Good story all around though! ^_^

A nice start for a story, but please don't hate me for saying that it's quite spartan when it comes to details. Anyway, you should be proud of capturing NEville's core characters and figuring out his thoughts. Nice.

well done, a rare and very good love story. It was nice to see minor charactors get together without the help-pushing of the golden trio

That was good! I really liked how you portrayed their romance and how the 7th and 8th chapters were so well written. It just seemed like this big whirlwind of anger and confustion. Very well done! Keep writing!

Ellen :o)

This was different.

How could JKR NOT like this pairing. Oh, well, she totally missed the boat.

Wonderful story. The one problem I have with the Harry Potter series is that the only person that can defeat anyone is Harry. All it takes for evil men to thrive is for good men to do nothing.

At least Neville has a walk on part in the role unlike Harry's lead role in the cage.

THANKS!! I knew you wouldn't leave us all hanging

hey, what the- you can't do that! I know it's been over a year but please please update!

Omigosh I love this fic, so adorable, I give it a 10 :D! But are you sure you're going to keep this fic rated 'G'? Maybe it should be 'PG-13'? Just a suggestion. GREAT FIC!
elz

Yay Neville! Great job! Update soon!

Great story! I'm going to assume that there is going to be more because of the TBC at the end of the chapter. I've read this awhile ago but I just realised that I haven't reviewed. So, here's my review! Yeah, I hope don't sound stupid by asking for more. If there isn't more,than you can call me an idiot. Anyway, again, great job!

~Maggie Haggie

Loved the story please update very soon need me fix don't you know.

As I was saying, it's very nice. Lots of Luna and Neville, and I like the way he's so shy about her. That's cute.

So next time just work on your plot, or else just skip out on plot altogether and get on with it...(I did NOT just say that...)

Erm Yes. Well. Keep up the good work. I might not read the rest of it, but that's cause I'm busy and have to go take a shower. Don't be offended.

Cheers. :)
The Spatula Chick